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dear diary,
i have to resend you this letter because of one little correction that i
have to make in
the second to the last line of the second verse where i omitted the word
LOVE in the phrase ALL MY LOVE WILL FOREVER BE ONLY YOURS MY DEAR.
SO here's the second verse agan as corrected:
though the road ahead
be dark and dim
there's no doubt
i will love you still
hold my hand
as i make it clear
all my love will forever
be only yours my dear
so that's it. if i had a computer i could have just very easily made the
correction in my original letter, and i could have resent it you with
the above correction.
because i could not edit my original letter, i had to send you another
email with the correction plus my original email.
december 5, 2009
bomboy
dear diary,
i am trying to rewrite the lyrics of the next song because i don't feel
about the way it has been written. let me see if i can
improve it.
title - i walk with you
written - no recorded date but rewritten on december 4,2009
melody/lyrics - lolo bomboy
group B song # B 13
no cd/cassette demo tape,
melody not remembered
lyrics:
i walk with you
because you are lonely
i walk with you so
you can be near me
i walk with you
so i can tell you
all my life
i'll be glad to walk with you
though the road ahead
be dark and dim
there's no doubt
i will love you still
hold my hand
as i make it clear
all my love will forever
be only yours my dear
i'll walk with you
whenever you're lonely
i'll be the one
to drive all of your
tears away
i'll talk to you
whenever you need me
it's all the same
be it night or be it day
and so l hope
and i will pray
you and i
will remain to be
just as close
as we can ever be
no matter what
may cross our path
along the way
if trouble should come
to you and me
you can be sure
i will always stay
and stand by you
in every way
cause as you know
you can always count
on me
i sing this song
so you won't be lonely
i sing this song
just for you only
i sing this song
to show you my dear
there is nothing
at all that we
should fear
there is nothing
at all that we
should fear
i will try to find a melody for this song as i have re-written it. i
think though it has a more positive outlook than it had before.
much later on, i will try to show to you how this song appears as
re-written in comparison with the original so you can appreciate the
mechanics i employed in re-writing it.
there are two other songs in group B that i would also like to send you
the original lyrics of so you can see how the lyrics of the said songs
as i re-wrote them appear in comparison with the original lyrics.
i think it would really be interesting to see how the changes have made
such a difference in all three cases.
and by the way, i have found a new melody for song #B13, and i have
already made a voice recording of this new melody, so i do not forget it
again.
december 5, 2009
bomboy
because you are lonely
i walk with you so
you can be near me
i walk with you
so i can tell you
all my life
i'll be glad to walk with you
though the road ahead
be dark and dim
there's no doubt
i will love you still
hold my hand
as i make it clear
all my love will forever
be only yours my dear
i'll walk with you
whenever you're lonely
i'll be the one
to drive all of your
tears away
i'll talk to you
whenever you need me
it's all the same
be it night or be it day
and so l hope
and i will pray
you and i
will remain to be
just as close
as we can ever be
no matter what
may cross our path
along the way
if trouble should come
to you and me
you can be sure
i will always stay
and stand by you
in every way
cause as you know
you can always count
on me
i sing this song
so you won't be lonely
i sing this song
just for you only
i sing this song
to show you my dear
there is nothing
at all that we
should fear
there is nothing
at all that we
should fear
i will try to find a melody for this song as i have re-written it. i
think though it has a more positive outlook than it had before.
much later on, i will try to show to you how this song appears as
re-written in comparison with the original so you can appreciate the
mechanics i employed in re-writing it.
there are two other songs in group B that i would also like to send you
the original lyrics of so you can see how the lyrics of the said songs
as i re-wrote them appear in comparison with the original lyrics.
i think it would really be interesting to see how the changes have made
such a difference in all three cases.
and by the way, i have found a new melody for song #B13, and i have
already made a voice recording of this new melody, so i do not forget it
again.
december 5, 2009
bomboy
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