short discussion of songwriting/revision...

Sent: Sat, December 12, 2009 12:35:35 AM
Subject: my diary/lyrics-songbook -( short course on songwritng/revision

dear diary,

i will now continue from where i left off in my previous email and say
that as a consequence of the fact that i had to revise some of the
lyrics of the songs i've written, i was also  able to discuss the
subject of song revision.

and i also had the chance to make a further classification towards the
end by reason of which i was able to send you the original lyrics of the
songs i revised for purposes of comparison with the revised lyrics of
the said songs.

all in all, therefore, the presentation i have made can well be taken as
a short course on how to write songs, or on how i learned to write
songs, and even how to revise them. 

the method i learned is what i call the mechanical way of writing a
song.  and this will be the subject of my next email to you.

december 11, 2009

bomboy